By using feedback and research I feel that the magazine has reached the highest standard possible. Compared to the last version I believe the magazine has improved greatly, more codes and conventions have been added to all three pages so that they resemble the real thing. I am very pleased with the out come of my music magazine, I feel I have worked hard integrating feedback and research into my work.
As you can see below my front cover has changed from what it previously looked like. I removed one lure because I felt it didn’t fit in with what I was trying to create; I also felt it was cluttering up the page.
I tried to reduce the amount of different fonts were used, so that the page wasn’t too busy, it kept it simple but at the same time eye catching.
I felt that my contents page was lacking lures and conventions. I went back and added more conventions to make my page more attractive and appealing. The new page has more going on; I’ve added more article page numbers and colour, so now it isn’t as dull.
I feel that my double page spread was missing huge amounts of detail from lures, to glaze theory. I believe the changes I made make the page more attractive. The text seemed cramped up, which made it hard to read and understand. I’ve changed that putting the text into columns so it makes it clearer and more understandable.
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